Maddy, I agree with Emily Mae. Use words and descriptions that tells us you are there. Also, even though I can understand your spelling most of the time, you might have a messmate check or your blogger spell check, check your spellings so your descriptions are easier to understand. And for such a visual person as yourself, how bout a picture. And for an animal lover like yourself, to have no mention of Seaman surprises me.
Awesome! Next time you should make it more like you're there in the 1800's and not 2000's but otherwise it was great.
ReplyDeleteMaddy, I agree with Emily Mae. Use words and descriptions that tells us you are there. Also, even though I can understand your spelling most of the time, you might have a messmate check or your blogger spell check, check your spellings so your descriptions are easier to understand. And for such a visual person as yourself, how bout a picture. And for an animal lover like yourself, to have no mention of Seaman surprises me.
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